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20x20 enemy sprite, critique.
« on: December 10, 2010, 07:40:42 pm »
well, here he is. is there anything different you would do to him? pretty soon i'll get him a running animation.
« Last Edit: December 10, 2010, 07:41:27 pm by nemo »


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Re: 20x20 enemy sprite, critique.
« Reply #1 on: December 10, 2010, 07:42:05 pm »
get rid of red so we can use in calc?
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Re: 20x20 enemy sprite, critique.
« Reply #2 on: December 10, 2010, 07:43:26 pm »
get rid of red so we can use in calc?

it's a computer game...


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Re: 20x20 enemy sprite, critique.
« Reply #3 on: December 10, 2010, 07:45:11 pm »
oh
in that case..
His head doesn't really match the body(at least, that's what I think). Fix the head a bit(like color his head to greyish color)?
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Re: 20x20 enemy sprite, critique.
« Reply #4 on: December 10, 2010, 07:49:20 pm »
no I think that 'eye thing' is cool in the middle, it's a very simple sprite, but hey it looks cartoony so cool :)

his legs look like a graphed slop in my math textbook, maybe give him knees and make them bent.  the arms are ok.  the head maybe widen but keep the eye thing the same it's cool :)

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Re: 20x20 enemy sprite, critique.
« Reply #5 on: December 10, 2010, 08:08:54 pm »
I like the eye, but his boxy head doesn't match his more curved body.

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Re: 20x20 enemy sprite, critique.
« Reply #6 on: December 10, 2010, 08:10:30 pm »
Nice! I would make the head a bit more round, like other said, though.
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Re: 20x20 enemy sprite, critique.
« Reply #7 on: December 10, 2010, 08:26:21 pm »
I think you should probably either make the shoulders less square or the body wider. They seem a  little mismatched :)

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Re: 20x20 enemy sprite, critique.
« Reply #8 on: December 10, 2010, 09:07:07 pm »
changes made. i tried to implement most of what you guys asked for an added a little extra too, i think it turned out well. it's 18 pixels wide and 20 tall (the attachment says 20 wide, but those are just 2 transparent columns). now to get a running animation out of him... by the way, i didn't implement bent legs because it's hard to show bent legs when the sprite is standing with his shoulders squared towards you.
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Re: 20x20 enemy sprite, critique.
« Reply #9 on: December 10, 2010, 09:09:49 pm »
much betterer, it look great!

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Re: 20x20 enemy sprite, critique.
« Reply #10 on: December 11, 2010, 12:47:07 am »
Wow much better indeed! Nice job again! :)
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Re: 20x20 enemy sprite, critique.
« Reply #11 on: December 11, 2010, 07:33:02 am »
well, here he is. is there anything different you would do to him? pretty soon i'll get him a running animation.

I would make the head corners curve, probably 'cos I prefer it that way.

Nice job, though. :d

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Re: 20x20 enemy sprite, critique.
« Reply #12 on: December 11, 2010, 11:26:00 am »
look much better now!  :D
EDIT= yeongJIN_COOL can't wait until he sees the animating sprite.
« Last Edit: December 11, 2010, 11:34:32 am by yeongJIN_COOL »
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Re: 20x20 enemy sprite, critique.
« Reply #13 on: December 11, 2010, 11:33:44 am »
look much better now!  :D

oH! i just noticed another image, much better, curve head!!!

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Re: 20x20 enemy sprite, critique.
« Reply #14 on: December 11, 2010, 07:57:36 pm »
So far so good?

edit: i just realized i'm being inconsistent with my leg-shading. fixed that.
edit2: and i'm lacking the light gray belt in some of them. fixed.
« Last Edit: December 11, 2010, 08:04:25 pm by nemo »