Omnimaga
General Discussion => Art => Topic started by: MechaTech84 on June 19, 2007, 09:12:00 am
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I did this in about an hour maybe.... probably less. I think it is pretty good.
This is my first attempt at drawing anything other than a cube on the computer... All opinions are greatly appreciated.
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Well, it's, ... original.
It's still better than a cube, but could need more work.
1-it looks like a round plastic sword, add edges to it to make it looks dangerous and evil
2-Fluo might look good sometimes, but not when the entirety of the sword is
Those are my 2 words, feel free to not listen to them, I'm bad drawer myself.
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the sword isn't consistent for one. Some parts have thick lines, others have just 1 pixel, and the designs dont apear to contour to a 3D shape. I am not sure if its supposed to be a beam sowrd, but if so, the blade should be symetrical. If its supposed to be a regualr sword, it should have an edge.
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Maybe you should put some gaussin(however you spell it) blur on a shadow layer under the sword part to give it a glowing shiny look.
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Ya, it is supposed to be a beam sword, like a light saber or something. I am not a good drawer in real life so this is about the only thing I would stand a chance at drawing there, so I drew it on the computer.... It is *amazingly* much better than any other sword I have drawn.... Oh well.
Necro: where isn't the blade symtrical? If you mean the darker green and white parts I don't know how to fix that, other wise.... I have no idea where it's not symmetrical.
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maybe he means don't do the shadow and highlight spot thing. it makes it look more like a solid (plastic tube). A beam saber tends to have a diffuse glow with a uniform gradient starting in the middle. fuzzier too.
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Oh! Ok, I can try that... It will take a while for me to get it right though....