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General Discussion => Art => Topic started by: Stefan Bauwens on April 20, 2011, 09:07:06 am

Title: Nenex, a comic I once drew
Post by: Stefan Bauwens on April 20, 2011, 09:07:06 am: These are some comics I ever made. It goes about a snake, named Nenex. The story is unfinished though.
(http://img.removedfromgame.com/imgs/nenex.jpg)
(http://img.removedfromgame.com/imgs/TEST.jpg)

EDIT: Added another part I forgot to post.
Title: Re: Nenex, a comic I ever drew
Post by: Munchor on April 20, 2011, 09:23:56 am: First of all, perhaps change the topic name to "Nenex, a comic I once drew". The graphics/drawing are looking pretty nice. The story is good too, but could be more intriguing.
Title: Re: Nenex, a comic I ever drew
Post by: Freyaday on April 20, 2011, 09:38:26 am: I agree with Scout. My tip for the story is to flesh it out more, like how Nenex came to be in the zoo, and if he was a wild snake at one point, perhaps have him miss being free. You need a reason why he's in there and a reason why he wants to get out. Great job, man, can't wait to see where this goes.
Title: Re: Nenex, a comic I once drew
Post by: Stefan Bauwens on April 20, 2011, 09:49:11 am: Thank you. Thanks for the advice too. I edited the title. I won't be able to continue drawing for a while, because I'm kinda busy.
Title: Re: Nenex, a comic I ever drew
Post by: Freyaday on April 20, 2011, 09:50:16 am: Quote from: Stefan Bauwens on April 20, 2011, 09:49:11 am
Man, Belgium hasn't got a government for superlong. In fact, it's a record.

Umm, what?
Title: Re: Nenex, a comic I once drew
Post by: Stefan Bauwens on April 20, 2011, 09:51:19 am: What the? I must have pasted something over my text. I'll edit it straight away.
Title: Re: Nenex, a comic I once drew
Post by: Darl181 on April 20, 2011, 03:29:04 pm: Nice ;D

I remember when I was in fourth grade or something, some other kid was bragging about he supposedly made some comic called "ninja guardian" that sold for 'gazillions' to newspapers worldwide...something that big deserved a parody.
For about two or three years a friend and I made these "Ninja Rabbit" comics, I should find some of them...
Title: Re: Nenex, a comic I once drew
Post by: Munchor on April 20, 2011, 04:13:30 pm: Quote from: Freyaday on April 20, 2011, 09:50:16 am
Quote from: Stefan Bauwens on April 20, 2011, 09:49:11 am
Man, Belgium hasn't got a government for superlong. In fact, it's a record.

Umm, what?

lolwut?

@Stefan: Too bad, coding Myst?
Title: Re: Nenex, a comic I once drew
Post by: Stefan Bauwens on April 20, 2011, 04:15:36 pm: Not right now, but I would like to spend some time on it. I just gotta think what I have to do. There are so many steps I can choose from :P
Title: Re: Nenex, a comic I once drew
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on May 26, 2011, 04:22:06 am: THis looks nice. You draw quite well :D
Title: Re: Nenex, a comic I once drew
Post by: Stefan Bauwens on May 26, 2011, 06:45:22 am: Quote from: DJ_O on May 26, 2011, 04:22:06 am
THis looks nice. You draw quite well :D
Thank's. But you won't see new comics of me for A WHILE. I'm atm a bit more interested in calcs and such and I'm also quite busy. But maybe I will draw other comics when I feel like it(and have time) :)