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General Discussion => Art => Topic started by: Snake X on September 03, 2011, 02:50:36 pm

Title: something i made
Post by: Snake X on September 03, 2011, 02:50:36 pm

I kinda got bored yesterday for a bit (well not really bored but determined) and i wanted to see what i could do with this one photo I took one day in photoshop because i got inspired to re-use it after i havnt used it in a while. So what do you all think of it? Any constructive criticism is welcome and encouraged. It's my latest work:

(http://i53.tinypic.com/16iedg6.jpg)

Title: Re: something i made
Post by: willrandship on September 03, 2011, 02:54:43 pm

For some reason when I saw this I thought of the Double Rainbow guy :P.

It looks nice! One suggestion I have: The purple line has a slightly blurred edge, where the green one looks much sharper. I think it would look better a little blurred IMO.

Title: Re: something i made
Post by: NanoWar on September 03, 2011, 03:11:24 pm

Great colours. Only the bird is annoying :)

Title: Re: something i made
Post by: Snake X on September 03, 2011, 03:18:04 pm

yes thats my thoughs exactly lol.. i think i'll photoshop out the bird..

and i'll see what the blurred green line will look like

Title: Re: something i made
Post by: flyingfisch on September 03, 2011, 03:18:46 pm

The bird brings life into the picture. nice pic!

Title: Re: something i made
Post by: Snake X on September 03, 2011, 03:32:10 pm

yeah, thats also what i had in mind too.. but i'll compare the two to see which ones better

Title: Re: something i made
Post by: mrmprog on September 03, 2011, 03:59:51 pm

Wow, that looks really cool. It would make a good background. I agree that the green line should be blurred.

Title: Re: something i made
Post by: Snake X on September 03, 2011, 04:10:36 pm

ok, i made a few changes, so hows this:

(http://i56.tinypic.com/sfawyb.jpg)

Title: Re: something i made
Post by: willrandship on September 04, 2011, 12:16:14 am

Nice Bird removal! :P

It's looking even better to me!