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Title: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on April 08, 2010, 08:26:13 pm
Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior

Sneak sneak.

If you have a Facebook... support me by becoming a fan. :)
Phantom Sanctuary Facebook Fan Page (http://www.facebook.com/PSanctuary)
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: SirCmpwn on April 08, 2010, 08:28:39 pm
Oh, that actually sounds pretty cool.
I'll fan it.
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: Geekboy1011 on April 08, 2010, 08:30:52 pm
sounds epic cant wait to see what it becomes

if i may ask whats its expected length ?? or you just winging it atm :P

need any help ask i cant fan you cause i dont have a face book oh well need something ask i want to read it now XD
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: Raylin on April 08, 2010, 08:41:03 pm
Thank you. I will keep this in mind.
You guys are in the special thanks section BTW.
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: meishe91 on April 08, 2010, 08:52:46 pm
Fanned it :) Sounds cool.
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: Raylin on April 08, 2010, 08:54:06 pm
Thanks. :)
Love the support I'm getting!
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: _player1537 on April 08, 2010, 08:57:09 pm
this sounds great, I would fan it but I don't have a FB
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: Raylin on April 08, 2010, 09:52:07 pm
Perhaps I'll post a chapter...
Who knows? :D
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on April 08, 2010, 10:50:22 pm
wow nice that you are writing a book! I personally don't read as much but I am still curious what you are gonna come up with. Are you planning to get it published later?

Note, I joined your FB group. I'll remain fan unless I get spammed the shit our of my inbox with invitations :P
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: Raylin on April 08, 2010, 10:51:44 pm
Yes.
I most definitely will try to.
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on April 08, 2010, 11:02:23 pm
I most definitely will try to.
spam me with invites? :(

j/k I know it's about getting published. Good luck on both the book and that ^^
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: mapar007 on April 09, 2010, 02:17:11 am
New subforum: calculator books & stories. j/k

Great idea! I've always been wanting to write a book, but yeah, I seem unable to write any coherent fiction beyond 10 pages...
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: Silver Shadow on April 09, 2010, 02:35:23 am
I've become a fan too now. Would be cool if you published the first chapter or something, so that we could drool in peace... :P
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: SirCmpwn on April 09, 2010, 08:49:07 am
I tried to write a book once.
I got 73 pages in and trashed it.
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on April 09, 2010, 09:25:14 am
I only really did comic books. Both major ones were 90-100 pages but the drawing and story are not that great x.x, but again they're game-books like D&D and Un Livre Dont Vous Êtes Le Héros series.
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: jsj795 on April 09, 2010, 09:48:16 am
^^ I really would like to write a book, but I'm not patient enough to write them. I would usually write like 1~2 chapters, lose interest, and get another inspiration, write 1~2 chapters, lose interest, etc... :(
Your book sounds really nice, and I would like to see the rest of the book!
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: Raylin on April 10, 2010, 09:56:48 am
I may release a chapter today...
Be ready. :D
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: SirCmpwn on April 10, 2010, 10:13:01 am
/me braces himself
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: Geekboy1011 on April 10, 2010, 10:46:52 am
sweet cant wait to read it if you do :) and then constructively critique it :P
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: indubitably on April 10, 2010, 11:01:43 am
Any chance you go to Glenbard North, I noticed many people were fans from there.
I also know a couple people from there.
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: Raylin on April 10, 2010, 11:07:01 am
Yes, I go to Glenbard North.
What's up?
Who do you know from there?
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: indubitably on April 10, 2010, 11:07:56 am
Well he may have gone to glenbard south, do you know Derek Johnson?
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: Raylin on April 10, 2010, 11:08:47 am
Nah.
Don't know anyone like that.

NOTE: Chapter 1 is finished.
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: Geekboy1011 on April 10, 2010, 11:21:52 am
request by raylin :P so he can post somthing :P
/me runs
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: Raylin on April 10, 2010, 11:25:24 am
MOVED ALL CHAPTERS TO THE FIRST POST.
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: SirCmpwn on April 10, 2010, 11:43:26 am
/me downloads, reads
This is really good.
I got the the end of the file and was disappointed I couldn't turn the page.
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: indubitably on April 10, 2010, 12:06:03 pm
wow, great so far. Keep it up!
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: Raylin on April 10, 2010, 12:25:48 pm
I'm going to make a subforum for this.
Then, all the Chapters I release will be on an updates page.

:)
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on April 10, 2010, 01:29:21 pm
Wow nice

Unfortunately sub-forums are only for calc, computer (both non-math/physics) and ROM hacks, though :( so other stuff would still need to be located in Misc section. However I can sticky the topic, which I'll do right now.

As an option, as soon as you get a calc project or computer/rom hack, you can use one of your subforum to post about your book too, like {AP} do with his random web projects.
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: indubitably on April 10, 2010, 09:26:49 pm
This is just one more thread I will be checking regularly
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: Geekboy1011 on April 10, 2010, 09:54:50 pm
nnnnnnggggghhhhh want more
/me attacks raylin for more >:D

very nice few things i have a personal issue with but its your writing style so its fine ^_^

other than that its very good and does keep you hanging for more
and i cant wait to see character development as atm you have hinted alot of the characters personalities but alot seems is still to be filled in :)
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: Raylin on April 11, 2010, 10:39:21 am
Thank you.

:)

Also, Geekboy, if you could PM me a list of issues that you have with Phantom Sanctuary, that would be IMMENSELY helpful.

NOTE: Chapter 2, Part 1 is up.
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on April 11, 2010, 01:27:21 pm
Darn I'll sure have a lot of stuff to read soon x.x

Oh well it's worth it I'm sure so I'm downloading now to read later
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: Raylin on April 11, 2010, 06:16:46 pm
I actually don't like this Chapter...

It seems so... ugh.
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: Geekboy1011 on April 11, 2010, 06:21:10 pm
yeah thats the main problem i have with this particualr chapter its not...it really just filler still getting you up to speed so its not that intersting i think maby you need to incorperate some more of his and her past into this chapter to make it seem more idk ....graspable maby just to keep your attention a bit better ^_^

like i said personal issues with it just having to do with the way you describe you people at teh start of the chapter its nothing wrong at all its completely normall way of writing its just what i last read wasnt like that so its a bit different to me thats all ^_^
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: Raylin on April 11, 2010, 06:34:27 pm
Agreed.

I think I will release a very large Chapter 3 and re-up Chapter 2 as one large file.
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: Geekboy1011 on April 11, 2010, 06:43:56 pm
ah well good luck and as dull as it may have seemed it was still interesting and i cant wait to read more
/me looks at the stavk of like 50 book s he wants to read....nah this is first XD
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: indubitably on April 11, 2010, 09:40:40 pm
Where do I download the chapter at?
Title: Re: Phantom Sanctuary
Post by: Raylin on April 11, 2010, 09:46:03 pm
First post.

All chapters will be released in the first post from now on.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on April 28, 2010, 09:03:10 pm
Updated Chapter 1.
Uploaded on the first post.

Enjoy.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on April 28, 2010, 09:59:50 pm
cool I'll check out when I get some time :)
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Geekboy1011 on April 28, 2010, 11:29:14 pm
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just epic raylin just epic cant wait to read more

god i want to read more already ;.;
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on April 28, 2010, 11:39:45 pm
This is what the cover looks like currently. (http://i43.tinypic.com/16h7w2o.png)
WARNING: VERY SIMPLE.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: jsj795 on April 29, 2010, 05:46:56 pm
Will the cover be done by you or do you plan to pay someone like the illustrator that the publisher has? It looks okay, and will look pretty cool if you can add a nice picture.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on April 29, 2010, 05:48:22 pm
mhmm I would remove the dot between phantom and sanctuary and add a space instead. Else, you would need to write your name like ray.m.perry, to keep the cover consistent.

A nice pic would be a good addition indeed
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on April 30, 2010, 12:11:21 am
Pictures?

What do you suggest?
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Geekboy1011 on May 06, 2010, 11:38:22 pm
hmm i think i have a good idea for a cover but could you pm me a description of what the sanctuary place looks like so i dont mess it up :P
(kinda hard to make a cover design only knowing chapter one XD)
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on May 07, 2010, 01:55:01 pm
Quote from: Chapter 7
The entire building was like some sort of massive cathedral. There were pillars of pure alabaster stone all around, statues of goddesses in various poses, benches, and a beautiful stained-glass window that had another goddess on it that also was native to Christian. The floor was covered in white sand and held a beautiful marble fountain in the center of the room. There were also two sets of marble stairs that curved around another doorway and connected wall to wall. An old chandelier and wall lanterns filled the room with an ambient amber light and made the entire place feel sacred.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Geekboy1011 on May 07, 2010, 06:43:21 pm
alright thats perfect for what i needed ill see what i can do oh do you bye chance know the dimensions of the book or should i just go generic for now????

oh and im handdrawing it cause i suck with photoshop/gimp still
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on May 14, 2010, 10:58:58 pm
Chapter 2 up.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on May 14, 2010, 11:06:59 pm
I'll need to restart reading this at one point, when my mind is clean enough to concentrate reading
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on May 14, 2010, 11:11:36 pm
LOL, DJ.

Phantom Sanctuary wants YOU to read it.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on May 14, 2010, 11:19:41 pm
well the issue is that as non english native person, reading a book in english requires me much more concentration than an english people, and since I have reading comprehension issues, it won't help either. ANd recen events (real life) causes me to have an harder time at concentrating x.x
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on May 14, 2010, 11:35:04 pm
I understand.

Perhaps when it is finished, I'll translate it into another language.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Geekboy1011 on May 15, 2010, 01:15:42 am
ggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg going to read/me marches of like he is being controlled by somthing

...flip.....flip......flip....

ggggg sweet XD
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on May 15, 2010, 09:12:40 am
Any comments/critique?
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Geekboy1011 on May 15, 2010, 12:37:45 pm
well its definetily a shorter chapter than the last one ^^
and after not having read the first chapter in a while i got confused cause you had jumped to the boys perspective

so my only critique this time is you jumped right into a large chunk of new plot with out much of a leadin idk how i would lead it in but other than that i think its good its descriptive enough and doesnt confuse me like a lot of other things i have read

the only other thing is change it from officer 1212 :P the use of 12 3 times in the chapter juset seems a bit odd to me 

may i suggest 13-37 :P (j/k)
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on May 15, 2010, 12:46:40 pm
In regards to that, if you remember in the first chapter, Christian got knocked unconscious.
He woke up the next morning
Spoiler For Chapter 1:
after Harmony got dragged off by Magnus.

So, the next morning is all he remembers right now.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Geekboy1011 on May 15, 2010, 01:38:39 pm
oh ya that makes more sense now XD

anyway still epic :P
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on May 15, 2010, 05:40:06 pm
Oh!
Before I forget, I'm going to throw this out there.

The Chapters I upload here ARE NOT THE FINISHED PRODUCTS!
Think of them as an advance reader's copy.

I still have to grammar check and trim the things.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Geekboy1011 on May 15, 2010, 05:56:01 pm
i know ^^ and i cant wait to see this when its done what are your plans for getting it published or somthing?
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on May 15, 2010, 06:16:51 pm
Yes. Published.
Full release by May 28th... hopefully.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on September 09, 2010, 10:41:40 pm
*bump*

Only so that I can remind myself to work on this.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on September 10, 2010, 12:12:58 am
/me wonders if this means some chapter releases soon
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Geekboy1011 on September 10, 2010, 12:14:16 am
/me wonders if this means some chapter releases soon

what he said :P
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: mapar007 on September 10, 2010, 03:43:03 am
Oooh... /me wants more Raylin awesomeness.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on September 10, 2010, 02:18:31 pm
There are many things that in this world that can be considered strange. Unusual. Something that you can't possibly comprehend because it's beyond those social norms that you've been born into. But, what if we told you that you've been lied to? What if we told you that your entire world is a lie? A fabrication made of greed and corruption. You'd think we're insane. But, what if we told you that we were the truth and you are the ones lost in the madness? Suddenly, insanity isn't so uncommon, now is it?

Welcome to the real world; enjoy your stay.

-The broadcast made by Marcelo Gregio, addressing everyone in the Violetta Province
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Geekboy1011 on September 10, 2010, 02:21:33 pm
heh thats just epic i like it alot :P

and its true to unless your a stubborn asshat :P
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on September 10, 2010, 04:32:53 pm
Lol nice Raylin :D
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on September 20, 2010, 02:40:20 am
Sneak sneak.

(Check the first post again. Download Chapter 1.)
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on September 20, 2010, 03:58:00 am
!

I think I'll grab a copy now even if I may not read everything soon. I would like to take a quick look at it at one point :) (Next weekend maybe)
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: mapar007 on September 20, 2010, 09:24:27 am
/me is SO going to check if that book is available in Belgium.

Oh, can omni regulars haz free PDF :P (EDIT: of the full version, that is)
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on September 20, 2010, 09:28:17 am
Yeah. I will post up all of the RTFs then compile for yous.

EDIT: Chapter 2 up.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on September 21, 2010, 02:18:16 am
*bump*
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on September 21, 2010, 02:20:54 am
COol to hear chapter 2 is up! Darn you write fast o.o
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on September 21, 2010, 03:07:41 pm
Chapter 3 done!

Please know that these are COMPLETELY different Chapters than before.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on September 21, 2010, 03:13:58 pm
Downloading for later read ^^
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on September 21, 2010, 03:58:38 pm
Thanks, DJ. :D

@Everyone else: No one else is gonna read it? :c
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on September 21, 2010, 03:59:54 pm
Something I worry about is that some people might not check this sub-forum for the book but rather for the game so it can be kinda hidden from them. Maybe you should move the topic in misc discussion. Idk. Also school is an issue x.x

EDIT: You might want to PM geekboy because he was very interested, if I remember, but unfortunately he has limited computer access
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on September 22, 2010, 07:19:52 pm
Chapter 4 done!
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: FinaleTI on September 22, 2010, 07:32:04 pm
I should start reading this...

I'm putting this into a Flashbook to read on my TI-84. ;)
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on September 22, 2010, 07:32:32 pm
Very nice!
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: SirCmpwn on September 22, 2010, 07:32:57 pm
I haven't read 4 yet, but 1-3 look sweet.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on September 22, 2010, 07:35:45 pm
Thanks, Sir. :)

Also, don't be afraid to give some advanced critique! Every comment makes the book better! :D
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: SirCmpwn on September 22, 2010, 07:39:27 pm
Chapter 2, page 2, halfway down:
"Why can we have a quiet run?" should be "When can we have a quiet run?" or "Why can't we have a quiet run?"

Chapter 2, Page 3, near top:
"No, we can't.//" Why the slashes?

Chapter 3, Page 2, last sentence should be indented
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on September 22, 2010, 07:53:22 pm
Thank you, Sir.
I'm using WordPad, so I may not catch everything. :P
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on September 23, 2010, 05:57:27 pm
*bump*

Chapter 5 done!
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: SirCmpwn on September 23, 2010, 05:59:43 pm
w00t
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on September 23, 2010, 05:59:53 pm
/me saves this on his comp.

When you have many chapters you should maybe put them in one zip file somewhere so it is easier for people to download ^^
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on September 23, 2010, 06:04:57 pm
I shall. :)
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Geekboy1011 on September 23, 2010, 08:51:02 pm
wrarw ill read in a few and you know my suggestions from last night on FB if you forgot ill reiterate later ^_^
now off to read chap 5 XD


Edit: read it and i like it alot ^_^ although i'm starting to think your chapters could be a bit longer maybe ??? they just seem to be ending real fast then again im a fast reader so it may be longer than i think X.x
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on September 25, 2010, 01:53:16 am
I see. Chapter 6 soonish. :)
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on September 25, 2010, 02:01:54 am
Cool. This is progessing fast :D
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on September 25, 2010, 02:35:31 am
CRAP! Homecoming was today and I couldn't finish Chapter 6. No worries, I shall reward you all with a long Chapter 6 and a Chapter 7.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on September 25, 2010, 02:46:13 am
Sorry to hear D:

Good luck!
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on September 25, 2010, 05:46:44 pm
Chapter 6 done.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on September 25, 2010, 05:58:04 pm
Cool, saving it now :)
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: SirCmpwn on September 26, 2010, 08:58:54 am
I really need to read this.  If only I had time, and ink.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: ztrumpet on September 26, 2010, 09:46:30 am
This is awesome!  Nice job!  I just had a chance to read all the chapters and I really like it.  I can't wait for Chapter 7! ;D
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on September 26, 2010, 09:48:39 am
Thank you, ztrumpet! That means a lot to me. :)
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on September 26, 2010, 01:30:20 pm
I really need to read this.  If only I had time, and ink.
ink???? What for????
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: calcdude84se on September 26, 2010, 02:10:52 pm
To print it out, I assume.
I really need to read this :)
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: SirCmpwn on September 26, 2010, 02:19:58 pm
Yeah, to print it.  I don't like reading on the computer.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on September 26, 2010, 03:46:38 pm
Oh ok in my previous I only took regular ink (as pens) in account and was a bit confused x.x

I never bothered getting another printer because those things break all the time and I got tired of buying new ones every hour.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: FinaleTI on September 26, 2010, 04:59:08 pm
2 new chapters? Awesome! I gotta go update my flashbook. ;D
Does anyone want me to post it so you can read it on your calculator? Cuz we all know it's the most convenient way of carrying a book around.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on September 26, 2010, 05:12:33 pm
Mhmm that would be cool, but would it even fit at all? That said, maybe it would fit on the TI-89 or Nspire.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on September 26, 2010, 05:21:46 pm
Most definitely, FinaleTI! :D
Post it ASAP!
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Geekboy1011 on September 26, 2010, 05:23:25 pm
please do
i need something to do during college math topics tommorow :P
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on September 26, 2010, 05:30:03 pm
Also, if you could make a title screen, that would be beast!

If you need the actual cover for the APP, I can provide that. :)
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: calcdude84se on September 26, 2010, 05:35:59 pm
Using FlashBook (http://flashbook.sf.net), here is a copy of chapters 1-6 (both the .ebk file (gzip'd) and the .8xk application)
It's hyphenated, chapter headings are listed in the table of contents, and it's only two pages :)
Edit: App pages, that is :P
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: FinaleTI on September 26, 2010, 05:53:25 pm
Darn it, you beat me too it! Does yours have the aforementioned grammar and spelling fixes though?

@Raylin: If you wanted a title screen I could see what I could rig together with a custom font if you could send me the picture.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on September 26, 2010, 06:00:40 pm
All right then.

Also, do not worry. I am writing this book in Wordpad.
So, there is lack of spell and grammar check but the final copy will be edited and made awesome. :)

@FinaleTI:
Spoiler For Spoiler:
(http://img.removedfromgame.com/imgs/1285538420-25550_427970999615_230314144615_5383693_632905_n.jpg)
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on September 26, 2010, 06:03:51 pm
Using FlashBook (http://flashbook.sf.net), here is a copy of chapters 1-6 (both the .ebk file (gzip'd) and the .8xk application)
It's hyphenated, chapter headings are listed in the table of contents, and it's only two pages :)
Edit: App pages, that is :P
Wow I always forget about that app. When it comes to text viewers on the 83+, I always think of K-edit, the BASIC editor and Notefolio.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: ztrumpet on September 26, 2010, 06:09:19 pm
Hey, that's really cool!  I'll put it on my calc after it's done. :)
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on September 26, 2010, 06:14:26 pm
But, is this thing actually editable? Shouldn't you wait until the official thing comes out to avoid repackaging the thing?
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on September 26, 2010, 06:25:42 pm
He could maybe just package each chapters separately?
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Geekboy1011 on September 26, 2010, 06:27:30 pm
its editable
the ebk opens in the computer side application
then all you have to do is copypasta your new sections and have it recompile the app done ^_^
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on September 26, 2010, 06:34:52 pm
All right then.

Remind me to put an eBook exclusive in there. :P
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: FinaleTI on September 26, 2010, 06:55:28 pm
Here's my shot at the title screen. If you guys think it's good, I'll start the custom font.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on September 26, 2010, 07:10:56 pm
You should move the entire graphic down a bit so you can center it.
But, other than that, that's great!

And, when you make the custom font, try to aim for sans serif. Something like Ariel Narrow.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: FinaleTI on September 26, 2010, 07:13:40 pm
Ok. I was gonna make the custom font use the extra chars for the title screen, but I can try to change the rest of the font too.
What size do you want it? I'll work on this when I can, but I can't guarantee it will be done soon.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on September 26, 2010, 07:26:01 pm
That's fine. Try to get the font about 7x4-ish.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: FinaleTI on September 26, 2010, 07:47:12 pm
How does this look so far?
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on September 26, 2010, 08:00:40 pm
That looks nice :)
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: ztrumpet on September 26, 2010, 08:02:54 pm
Agreed.  Excellent font. ;D
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: FinaleTI on September 26, 2010, 08:12:16 pm
I just finished the lowercase.  ;D

Edit: I changed the i and j.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on September 26, 2010, 08:31:01 pm
Very nice. :D
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: FinaleTI on September 26, 2010, 08:50:36 pm
After some hard work, here's an update of the Flashbook with the new font. It's 3 app pages and doesn't have the title screen yet.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on September 26, 2010, 09:09:58 pm
Wow that came out smaller than I expected. Also it looks nice and easy to read.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on September 26, 2010, 11:58:56 pm
VERY NICE, FinaleTI!  :o
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: ztrumpet on September 27, 2010, 04:16:04 pm
Nice job! ;D
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on September 27, 2010, 04:17:52 pm
Expect awesomeness today.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on September 27, 2010, 05:19:14 pm
O.O

Did you manage to finish everything or did you do a lot of new chapters?
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on September 27, 2010, 06:44:28 pm
Chapters 7, 8, 9, and 10 are up! :D
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: FinaleTI on September 27, 2010, 07:07:06 pm
Flashbook updated!
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on September 27, 2010, 07:50:30 pm
Sweeet! :D
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: calcdude84se on September 27, 2010, 09:02:05 pm
Very nice! This goes on my calc as soon as possible. :D
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on September 27, 2010, 10:12:19 pm
Nice update Raylin :D
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: Raylin on October 03, 2010, 05:50:31 pm
Remember that part where I actually finish a chapter?
Yeah...
Done.
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: FinaleTI on October 03, 2010, 05:58:16 pm
Remember that part where I actually finish a chapter?
Yeah...
Done.

Or when I update the Flashbook?

Cuz that's done too.


Edit: Fixed Chapter 10
Title: Re: [NOVEL] Phantom Sanctuary: Sins of the Savior
Post by: DJ Omnimaga on October 04, 2010, 01:24:23 am
More progress, nice :D