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General Discussion => Other Discussions => Miscellaneous => Topic started by: boot2490 on October 01, 2011, 02:11:36 pm

Title: Agent 09: Feedback?
Post by: boot2490 on October 01, 2011, 02:11:36 pm

I am planning to write a short (repeat: short, this is my first story for fun) spy (not novel, not novella, but longer than short story) story.

I was inspired by Alex Rider, Austin Powers, and Last Action Hero, so I want

• The bad guy to have a really evil, high stakes plot
• It to be funny (mostly camp because I am not exactly a comedy writer)
• The action to be REALLY REALLY over the top.

Idea Table:

Bad Guys	Assassins	Schemes	Names
Alexander Salvon Young, blonde rich kid who has a lot of silver	Jawbreaker Hydraulic carbonized steel Jaw	Blows up golden asteroid,	Die Again Tomorrow
Hal Burton Unsatisfied businessman Very evil and corrupt	Name? Paralyzed; synthetic spiderweb exoskeleton	Theaten world with particle gun	Live and then Die

So I want some feedback. Any ideas? Anybody have some really good world domination schemes?

Title: Re: Agent 09: Feedback?
Post by: parserp on October 02, 2011, 07:28:54 pm

You could blow it up. :P