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General Discussion => Other Discussions => Miscellaneous => Topic started by: ZippyDee on April 15, 2011, 03:24:44 am

Title: Plain
Post by: ZippyDee on April 15, 2011, 03:24:44 am
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Plain was the same as  it ever was the same.
Plainly plain...
Samely same...
But then...someone lit the flame.
Plain rode away on lions mane.
Where plain met fruits with strangely names.
Such wonderful things they did contain.
A shot of life to a hungry vein.
The captive beast who broke the chain.
And there upon that fruited plane,
is where plain became what plain became.
So much more than more than plain.
Plain will never be the same.

I have to say I find this to be a great work of poetry. Discuss?
Title: Re: Plain
Post by: Munchor on April 15, 2011, 07:42:05 am
"Where plain met fruits with strangely names." This ruins it all, who made it?

But it's still pretty good.
Title: Re: Plain
Post by: ZippyDee on April 15, 2011, 02:24:05 pm
I agree. That's the only line I don't really like.