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Re: Amanda
« Reply #15 on: January 06, 2011, 08:04:46 pm »
Thanks :) Yeah that's the reason I like it too, not to mention, when I start rhyming I sound like a tard.

Usually I don't use that much imagery in any of my poems, I prefer using concepts and a tiny bit and let the rest develop in the readers mind.
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Re: Amanda
« Reply #16 on: January 07, 2011, 12:09:43 am »
The only thing I made that could maybe be some sort of poem is the ROL3 intro and what I wrote for ROL4, but I don't even know if that could be considered as a poem :P

Also a way to make sure your poem rhyme properly is to add the word "desu" at the end of every line.
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Re: Amanda
« Reply #17 on: January 07, 2011, 12:18:51 am »
Quote from: DJ Omnimaga on January 07, 2011, 12:09:43 am
Also a way to make sure your poem rhyme properly is to add the word "desu" at the end of every line.
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Re: Amanda
« Reply #18 on: January 07, 2011, 04:50:53 pm »
Quote from: DJ Omnimaga on January 07, 2011, 12:09:43 am
The only thing I made that could maybe be some sort of poem is the ROL3 intro and what I wrote for ROL4, but I don't even know if that could be considered as a poem :P

Also a way to make sure your poem rhyme properly is to add the word "desu" at the end of every line.

That would be a boring poem as desu is the Japanese "being" verb. ie. am, is, was.
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Re: Amanda
« Reply #19 on: January 07, 2011, 05:18:31 pm »
It's what I am.
What I always will be.
I will never another be.

It's what I desu.
What I always will desu.
I will never another desu.

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Poetry
« Reply #20 on: January 08, 2011, 06:08:50 pm »
Showcase your poetry here :) (I was inspired by the Amanda thread)
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Past lies forgotten
Past lies unwanted
Forget your pain
Move forward, don't look back
Get our of the snares,
This pain has put on your heart
Love again
Live again
Move on

Don't let it swallow you alive
Don't sink into the pit
Move forward into the light
Get out from the darkness
Don't let your past define your future
You are better then the mistakes
You are better then other's bad choices
You are better

Become the real you
Don't slip down that slope
You have the strength to climb out
I wrote this a couple of weeks after Amy broke up with me. It kind of shows the state of my inner struggle with myself.
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Re: Poetry
« Reply #21 on: January 08, 2011, 06:12:03 pm »
sorry about that...  Great poem though.  ;)
also, is that why she hasn't been coming online lately?
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Re: Poetry
« Reply #22 on: January 08, 2011, 06:14:47 pm »
Thanks
Yeah probably, although she didn't come online much anyways. Now that we aren't together she has no reason to get on here.
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Re: Poetry
« Reply #23 on: January 08, 2011, 07:02:43 pm »
I didn't realize that you two broke up.  Sorry man. :-\
Nice poem. :D
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Re: Poetry
« Reply #24 on: January 08, 2011, 07:09:00 pm »
Yeah, kind of old news :/ I'm over it though mostly.

Thanks :) I should post more. I also should make a poem for the intro of TBP...
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Re: Poetry
« Reply #25 on: January 08, 2011, 07:09:58 pm »
Yeah I remember when I saw it on Facebook, I was sad for you. :(

Nice poem, btw
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Re: Poetry
« Reply #26 on: January 08, 2011, 07:11:22 pm »
Yeah, it was a pretty rough time for me.

Thanks :)
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Re: Amanda
« Reply #27 on: January 08, 2011, 07:11:23 pm »
lol

Actually I think I heard someone kept saying it at the end of every sentence no matter what

Hey guys! desu
I feel very happy today desu!
I lost the game, though desu.
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Re: Amanda
« Reply #28 on: January 08, 2011, 07:12:41 pm »
Quote from: DJ Omnimaga on January 08, 2011, 07:11:23 pm
Hey guys! desu
I feel very happy today desu!
I lost the game, though desu.
That is pure win :p

I lost the game though :(
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Re: Amanda
« Reply #29 on: January 08, 2011, 07:21:14 pm »
Lol :P

Anyway the closest thing to a poem I even did was

You cannot change the future
But if there is no future
You have to create one

Everything that has a beginning
Has an end…

:P

That's all

I also believe one of the ROL4 projects from 2004 had some form of poem at the beginning that appeared like in Final Fantasy 1, 2 and 3 for the NES and FFIV The After Years.
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