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« on: January 13, 2010, 01:01:54 pm »
I was writing a poem for English, and it ended up being 1337

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4nc| 7h3 4c|'-'175 c|ic| n07hin6

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7h3 w0r1c| c|ic| n07 3nc| fr0m w4r
i7 c|ic| n07 3nc| fr0m c|i53453

i7 c|ic| n07 3nc| fr0m f100c| 0r fir3
in5734c| i7 3nc|3c| wi7h m4n5 cr347i0n
7h3 c0mp'-'73r ki113c| i7

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English translation:
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The World Ends

The world lost its morals
it lost its grammer
it lost itself to computers

Their minds were corrupted
and turned to mush
civilization slowely deteriorated

Until it became nothing
the youth became slaves to screens
and the adults did nothing

as they were slaves as well
the world did not end from war
it did not end from disease

it did not end from flood or fire
instead it ended with mans creation
the computer killed it

the computer and the internet
destruction is not due to death
but to stagnation
« Last Edit: January 13, 2010, 01:03:10 pm by Eeems »
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Re: Random Poems
« Reply #1 on: January 13, 2010, 01:08:31 pm »
lol nice


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Re: Random Poems
« Reply #2 on: January 13, 2010, 02:53:05 pm »
thanks :)
any comments on the poem itself?
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Re: Random Poems
« Reply #3 on: January 13, 2010, 02:58:04 pm »
I could say that some of the stuff said in it can be kinda true and it reflects on what some people actually do


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Re: Random Poems
« Reply #4 on: January 13, 2010, 03:08:05 pm »
yeah it does...its kind of sad actually how it does happen :/
and wow, this screen at school kills my eyes X.X it's wobbly
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Re: Random Poems
« Reply #5 on: January 13, 2010, 04:09:08 pm »
I think the worst cases are people getting addicted so much to WoW that they no longer eat nor drink then die in front of the comp


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Re: Random Poems
« Reply #6 on: January 13, 2010, 08:44:57 pm »
Don't forget that you're not 1137 anymore Eeems, lol! Geeze, you really are blue. What a dreary poem. =(

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Re: Random Poems
« Reply #7 on: January 13, 2010, 11:36:30 pm »
Lol, I'm better then leet now :p
lol, it's for school remember :p
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