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General Discussion => Other Discussions => Miscellaneous => Topic started by: boot2490 on May 12, 2012, 12:31:37 am
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I wrote a short story for a contest, and it turned out really good IMO. It is only 5000 words long, but it is filled to the brim with action packed awesomeness, and it feels longer, or more condensed than the average story of its length.
"Trouble stirs in a secret military base when three mysterious mercenaries make off with a truckload of experimental conventional missiles. Officer McDowell is quick to pursue the thieves, but he soon learns that their missile heist is not all it may seem." - Description on fictionpress.com
So, here's the link. Review if you have the time, but no pressure. It's well worth your while!
Enjoy. (http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3021631/1/The_Missile_Heist)
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Thanks for the link. I'll take a look at it later. :)
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Updated the story. Now split into two chapters, with a better cliffhanger in the middle. Anonymous reviews are allowed, so please take the time to review it if you can. Of course, if you have a fictionpress account, please log in before submitting a review.
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3021631/1/The_Missile_Heist (http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3021631/1/The_Missile_Heist)
PS: I also have another story up, Perspective: A collection of Vignettes, that already has a raving review. Please take the time to read it as well. I will post most things I write every once in a while, so if you like it, then please subscribe to my profile. I will post here when I have a new story, as well. Thanks!
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Ok thanks, I'll have to take a look. Hopefully I have some free time later or tomorrow. :)
Hopefully it doesn't use too much advanced english, though, else I might have troubles understanding it. :P
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I always thought your english was really good. I keep forgetting that french is your first language...