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Re: Phantom Sanctuary
« Reply #15 on: April 09, 2010, 09:48:16 am »
^^ I really would like to write a book, but I'm not patient enough to write them. I would usually write like 1~2 chapters, lose interest, and get another inspiration, write 1~2 chapters, lose interest, etc... :(
Your book sounds really nice, and I would like to see the rest of the book!


Spoiler For funny life mathematics:
1. ROMANCE MATHEMATICS
Smart man + smart woman = romance
Smart man + dumb woman = affair
Dumb man + smart woman = marriage
Dumb man + dumb woman = pregnancy
2. OFFICE ARITHMETIC
Smart boss + smart employee = profit
Smart boss + dumb employee = production
Dumb boss + smart employee = promotion
Dumb boss + dumb employee = overtime
3. SHOPPING MATH
A man will pay $2 for a $1 item he needs.
A woman will pay $1 for a $2 item that she doesn't need.
4. GENERAL EQUATIONS & STATISTICS
A woman worries about the future until she gets a husband.
A man never worries about the future until he gets a wife.
A successful man is one who makes more money than his wife can spend.
A successful woman is one who can find such a man.
5. HAPPINESS
To be happy with a man, you must understand him a lot and love him a little.
To be happy with a woman, you must love her a lot and not try to understand her at all.
6. LONGEVITY
Married men live longer than single men do, but married men are a lot more willing to die.
7. PROPENSITY TO CHANGE
A woman marries a man expecting he will change, but he doesn't.
A man marries a woman expecting that she won't change, and she does.
8. DISCUSSION TECHNIQUE
A woman has the last word in any argument.
Anything a man says after that is the beginning of a new argument.

Girls = Time * Money (Girls are a combination of time and money)
Time = Money (Time is money)
Girls = Money squared (So, girls are money squared)
Money = sqrt(Evil) (Money is also the root of all evil)
Girls = sqrt(Evil) squared (So, girls are the root of all evil squared)
Girls = Evil (Thus, girls are evil)
*Girls=Evil credit goes to Compynerd255*

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Re: Phantom Sanctuary
« Reply #16 on: April 10, 2010, 09:56:48 am »
I may release a chapter today...
Be ready. :D
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« Reply #17 on: April 10, 2010, 10:13:01 am »
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Re: Phantom Sanctuary
« Reply #18 on: April 10, 2010, 10:46:52 am »
sweet cant wait to read it if you do :) and then constructively critique it :P

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Re: Phantom Sanctuary
« Reply #19 on: April 10, 2010, 11:01:43 am »
Any chance you go to Glenbard North, I noticed many people were fans from there.
I also know a couple people from there.

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Re: Phantom Sanctuary
« Reply #20 on: April 10, 2010, 11:07:01 am »
Yes, I go to Glenbard North.
What's up?
Who do you know from there?
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Re: Phantom Sanctuary
« Reply #21 on: April 10, 2010, 11:07:56 am »
Well he may have gone to glenbard south, do you know Derek Johnson?

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Re: Phantom Sanctuary
« Reply #22 on: April 10, 2010, 11:08:47 am »
Nah.
Don't know anyone like that.

NOTE: Chapter 1 is finished.
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Re: Phantom Sanctuary
« Reply #23 on: April 10, 2010, 11:21:52 am »
request by raylin :P so he can post somthing :P
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Re: Phantom Sanctuary
« Reply #24 on: April 10, 2010, 11:25:24 am »
MOVED ALL CHAPTERS TO THE FIRST POST.
« Last Edit: April 11, 2010, 11:47:10 am by Raylin »
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« Reply #25 on: April 10, 2010, 11:43:26 am »
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This is really good.
I got the the end of the file and was disappointed I couldn't turn the page.

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Re: Phantom Sanctuary
« Reply #26 on: April 10, 2010, 12:06:03 pm »
wow, great so far. Keep it up!

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Re: Phantom Sanctuary
« Reply #27 on: April 10, 2010, 12:25:48 pm »
I'm going to make a subforum for this.
Then, all the Chapters I release will be on an updates page.

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Re: Phantom Sanctuary
« Reply #28 on: April 10, 2010, 01:29:21 pm »
Wow nice

Unfortunately sub-forums are only for calc, computer (both non-math/physics) and ROM hacks, though :( so other stuff would still need to be located in Misc section. However I can sticky the topic, which I'll do right now.

As an option, as soon as you get a calc project or computer/rom hack, you can use one of your subforum to post about your book too, like {AP} do with his random web projects.
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Re: Phantom Sanctuary
« Reply #29 on: April 10, 2010, 09:26:49 pm »
This is just one more thread I will be checking regularly
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