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Offline Raylin

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[x-post] The Space Between Seconds
« on: February 15, 2016, 04:47:35 pm »
tl;dr: This is a book I'm writing.

Formerly known as 'Phantom Sanctuary', I have been working on the world-building aspect and I think I've created a decent amount of content through commissions and other methods.

For prettiness, I have an imgur album of characters, located here.

General Synopsis

The worldwide introduction of mana has reduced everything manmade to white sand. While something critical was lost, something new was gained: those sensitive enough became magicians. With new powers now thrust upon, the magicians came together to rebuild civilization. In one year, they were finished rebuilding and society began to work on its infrastructure. However, the rebuild was not without tensions and violent outbreaks began between those with magic and those without. In a strange intervention of fate, an alloy was found that refused to be influenced by magic. This was quickly collected and forged into crude weapons. Thus, another world war began...

It's been six years now. An alloy collector for the reigning government has found a strange group of refugees who have hidden themselves in between space and time but are not magicians. Now, their destinies are entwined and with them, the outcome of the war.

A lot of things are subject to change but tell me what you think. I'll probably start writing very soon. And for those keeping count, this is revision 61.
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Offline TIfanx1999

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Re: [x-post] The Space Between Seconds
« Reply #1 on: February 16, 2016, 02:27:58 pm »
@Raylin :What, you mean you aren't done YET? :blah: Just kidding. Why the name change? At any rate, the plot looks pretty interesting. :D

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Re: [x-post] The Space Between Seconds
« Reply #2 on: February 17, 2016, 05:10:08 pm »
It's been six years now [...], this is revision 61.


All seriousness. welp that's a completely new plot line and as always i'm willing to read and give feed back as needed! Good luck keep us posted!!!!
« Last Edit: February 17, 2016, 06:50:32 pm by Geekboy1011 »