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Nenex, a comic I once drew
« on: April 20, 2011, 09:07:06 am »
These are some comics I ever made. It goes about a snake, named Nenex. The story is unfinished though.



EDIT: Added another part I forgot to post.
« Last Edit: April 20, 2011, 09:49:33 am by Stefan Bauwens »


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Re: Nenex, a comic I ever drew
« Reply #1 on: April 20, 2011, 09:23:56 am »
First of all, perhaps change the topic name to "Nenex, a comic I once drew". The graphics/drawing are looking pretty nice. The story is good too, but could be more intriguing.

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Re: Nenex, a comic I ever drew
« Reply #2 on: April 20, 2011, 09:38:26 am »
I agree with Scout. My tip for the story is to flesh it out more, like how Nenex came to be in the zoo, and if he was a wild snake at one point, perhaps have him miss being free. You need a reason why he's in there and a reason why he wants to get out. Great job, man, can't wait to see where this goes.
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Re: Nenex, a comic I once drew
« Reply #3 on: April 20, 2011, 09:49:11 am »
Thank you. Thanks for the advice too. I edited the title. I won't be able to continue drawing for a while, because I'm kinda busy.
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Re: Nenex, a comic I ever drew
« Reply #4 on: April 20, 2011, 09:50:16 am »
Man, Belgium hasn't got a government for superlong. In fact, it's a record.

Umm, what?
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Re: Nenex, a comic I once drew
« Reply #5 on: April 20, 2011, 09:51:19 am »
What the? I must have pasted something over my text. I'll edit it straight away.


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Re: Nenex, a comic I once drew
« Reply #6 on: April 20, 2011, 03:29:04 pm »
Nice ;D

I remember when I was in fourth grade or something, some other kid was bragging about he supposedly made some comic called "ninja guardian" that sold for 'gazillions'  to newspapers worldwide...something that big deserved a parody.
For about two or three years a friend and I made these "Ninja Rabbit" comics, I should find some of them...
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Re: Nenex, a comic I once drew
« Reply #7 on: April 20, 2011, 04:13:30 pm »
Man, Belgium hasn't got a government for superlong. In fact, it's a record.

Umm, what?

lolwut?

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Re: Nenex, a comic I once drew
« Reply #8 on: April 20, 2011, 04:15:36 pm »
Not right now, but I would like to spend some time on it. I just gotta think what I have to do. There are so many steps I can choose from :P


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Re: Nenex, a comic I once drew
« Reply #9 on: May 26, 2011, 04:22:06 am »
THis looks nice. You draw quite well :D

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Re: Nenex, a comic I once drew
« Reply #10 on: May 26, 2011, 06:45:22 am »
THis looks nice. You draw quite well :D
Thank's. But you won't see new comics of me for A WHILE. I'm atm a bit more interested in calcs and such and I'm also quite busy. But maybe I will draw other comics when I feel like it(and have time) :)


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