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Agent 09: Feedback?
« on: October 01, 2011, 02:11:36 pm »
I am planning to write a short (repeat: short, this is my first story for fun) spy (not novel, not novella, but longer than short story) story.

I was inspired by Alex Rider, Austin Powers, and Last Action Hero, so I want
  • The bad guy to have a really evil, high stakes plot
  • It to be funny (mostly camp because I am not exactly a comedy writer)
  • The action to be REALLY REALLY over the top.

Idea Table:
Bad GuysAssassinsSchemesNames
Alexander Salvon
Young, blonde rich kid who has a lot of silver
Jawbreaker
Hydraulic carbonized steel Jaw
Blows up golden asteroid, Die Again Tomorrow
Hal Burton
Unsatisfied businessman Very evil and corrupt
Name?
Paralyzed; synthetic spiderweb exoskeleton
Theaten world with particle gunLive and then Die

So I want some feedback. Any ideas? Anybody have some really good world domination schemes?
« Last Edit: October 01, 2011, 02:12:38 pm by boot2490 »
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Re: Agent 09: Feedback?
« Reply #1 on: October 02, 2011, 07:28:54 pm »
You could blow it up. :P