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Unfinished (new DJ song and single in the works)
« on: March 15, 2014, 02:15:04 am »
UPDATE: Song finished! :D (and single album too! http://djomnimaga.bandcamp.com/album/unfinished-single )


Unfinished is a new power metal song from me, inspired from Sabaton, Sonata Arctica and Albion, as well as my previous work. You can buy it on http://djomnimaga.bandcamp.com/ as a single (which will also include alternate versions of three songs from my album Ancient Kingdom of Omnimaga) starting in April 2014.

DJ Omnimaga - Unfinished holds the distinction of being the only song I made to have lyrics written for it, although it is still an electronic instrumental, in case, one day, a cover of this would be made with actual heavy or power metal vocals.

Spoiler For LYRICS:
It is the agony, our doomsday arriving
Invaders coming from the evil
The higher we go, the higher they will come
For money, our land and our lives

We will burn
But that shall not be it
We'll fight through the agony

Unfinished, united we stand
Together as one for our freedom
Unfinished, we fight 'til the end
Together for all we die

They show no mercy, they're hungry for war
And blazing flames destroying our kingdom
Millions of lives lost, among our warriors
Is the fight of our lives deemed hopeless?

We're burning
But that shall not be it
We'll fight through the agony

Unfinished, united we stand
Together as one for our freedom
Unfinished, we fight 'til the end
Together for all we die

Unfinished, united we stand
Together as one for our freedom
Unfinished, we fight 'til the end
Together for all we die

Agony: something unknown to us
No Mercy: the way that we fight too
And fire balls are not something that can stop us
They stand no chance against pride

We have burned
But that shall not be it
We'll fight through the agony

Unfinished, united we stand
Together as one for our freedom
Unfinished, we fight 'til the end
Together for all we die

Unfinished, united we stand
Together as one for our freedom
Unfinished, united we stand


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Re: Unfinished
« Reply #1 on: March 16, 2014, 01:25:47 am »
Eargasming. As always when I hear your songs. :D

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Re: Unfinished
« Reply #2 on: March 16, 2014, 11:47:20 am »
Thanks :D
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Re: Unfinished
« Reply #3 on: March 23, 2014, 01:16:37 am »
Update: This might get expanded further, although I was considering keeping it not too long too since shorter songs are easier to play on radios and stuff. However, you can hear pretty much the entire song for now at


If it gets expanded further it will be the solo part for the most part. Song name will stay as "Unfinished" (Unfinished as in a battle where you are attacked but can still fight back)

Guess from which song file this new song was started from. :P (there are a few hints from the background melodies and synth/choir pad instruments)


Inspiration: Sabaton, Albion and Sonata Arctica


Also this will most likely go on a single with unused versions of three AKoO tracks, assuming I can figure out an artwork for such album (since this new song has explosion sounds in it, I think actual explosions, fire balls or fire would be fitting.
« Last Edit: March 23, 2014, 03:52:36 am by DJ Omnimaga »
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Re: Unfinished (new DJ song and single in the works)
« Reply #4 on: March 23, 2014, 05:32:23 am »
Hm, DJ, your xlib domain is working normally ;)
http://xlib.mtv-music-generator.com/DJ%20Omnimaga%20-%20Unfinished%20Demo1.mp3

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Re: Unfinished (new DJ song and single in the works)
« Reply #5 on: March 23, 2014, 05:32:28 pm »
I know. I just didn't take chance in case it broke again plus it has THEGAME in the URL :P

Thanks btw :D

DJ Omnimaga - Unfinished      3:40 (for now)         2014
DJ Omnimaga - Die Die Die - Alternate Version      5:14         2012
DJ Omnimaga - It's the End of Agony - Fast Version      6:01         2013
DJ Omnimaga - Heading into the Final Battle - Unused Version      4:23         2012
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Re: Unfinished (new DJ song and single in the works)
« Reply #6 on: March 23, 2014, 05:46:03 pm »
* Streetwalrus lost x.x
It sounds cool and the video is nice too. :)
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Re: Unfinished (new DJ song and single in the works)
« Reply #7 on: March 23, 2014, 11:22:23 pm »
Ok so here is the Youtube video of the song :D


It is also available in the first post with other info :D
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Re: Unfinished (new DJ song and single in the works)
« Reply #8 on: March 24, 2014, 01:56:28 am »
Wait you wrote lyrics. O.O That's cool. :D

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Re: Unfinished (new DJ song and single in the works)
« Reply #9 on: March 24, 2014, 11:24:30 am »
Lyrics O.O

Anyways, nice song :)

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Re: Unfinished (new DJ song and single in the works)
« Reply #10 on: March 25, 2014, 03:48:42 pm »
Thanks guys :D

Regarding lyrics, I hope Justin Bieber doesn't do a pop cover of this song ._,
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Re: Unfinished (new DJ song and single in the works)
« Reply #11 on: March 25, 2014, 05:31:37 pm »
Nooooooooooooooooo !!!! D: Please don't Justin. Just don't.

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Re: Unfinished (new DJ song and single in the works)
« Reply #12 on: March 25, 2014, 10:47:18 pm »
That said, even if it was someone else, I think that this song would be best covered as a punk rock, heavy metal, power metal or perhaps some grunge song.
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Re: Unfinished (new DJ song and single in the works)
« Reply #13 on: March 27, 2014, 01:08:49 pm »
Awesome to hear new stuff from you, DJ :) ! I really like the song, but I'll take the right to bear a bit of criticism. In my opinion, the composition is great and the lyrics are too, however, the result isn't probably quite what I want to hear. I think the "voice"/lead melody is too quiet. If the song is sung, it wouldn't be a problem, but at this instrumental stage it seems to be, well... unfinished. I really liked your last instrumental album with the louder lead melodies. Also 2:21 sounds quite a bit too much like 3:02 in "Ride Through the 4th Dimension" (my all-time-favorite of your power metal songs!).
Anyways, keep up the good stuff. :)

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Re: Unfinished (new DJ song and single in the works)
« Reply #14 on: March 27, 2014, 02:19:16 pm »
Strange, I didn't notice tjhe less loud melody much. I guess it's because it's faster and taken from the It's the end of agony file, though. :P
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